I want to be shattered,
Shattered to my very core,
Burn me,
Until dust is all that remains
Take me to my source,
Where essence burns bright white,
Where darkness dare not creep
Where things are,
Simple, pure, themselves
No need to explain
Let the tower fall and break,
Brick by brick, or in one fell swoop
Let it tumble on itself
Let me look at myself,
Bare, naked, utterly vulnerable
Reflections on the pool of my being,
The source
Wow! Ori, I am truely impressed. It is a great way to proccess. I often do the same. As a person who writes, I appreciate another skillful poet. Keep it coming!
ReplyDeleteAndy
Hey Ori this is really beautiful!
ReplyDeleteLove it.
Anat.
a beautiful expression of hope and happiness.
ReplyDeleteLoved it,
Sivan
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ReplyDeleteהרגישות שלך, האגרוף בבטן.
ReplyDeleteהיכולת לתרגם בצורה מדוייקת את הרגשות והמחשבות למילים.
היכולת שלך לאפשר לי לשים את עצמי במקומך בתוך מוחך, ליבך ונפשך.
אהבתי מאוד את סגנון הכתיבה שלך - השפה שלך.
תודה.